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There is a heart in a ribcage
And a brain sitting in a skull
There is a history that is void
And potential which is null

Just puddles of inspiration
Where the vast ocean once sprayed
An endless tide of moonshine
Swelled upon my parchment page

There's a brain sitting in a skull
There is a heart in a ribcage
There is ink in my fountain pen
But still no words on my page

Just embers of inspiration
Where a great fire once roared
I'll stoke it with those memories
I've been afraid of and ignored
i like the word 'ribcage' lol
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Picnic-Power Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Your poem here is amazing, I cannot wait to read more of your works. You are a really talented writer in my opinion. :)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you so much. I really appreciate that.

And thanks for watching me too! :)
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Picnic-Power Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aww no thanks needed! :meow:
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KBeth Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow... I cannot tell you how many times I've felt that way!!! This one gets a fav, for sure!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you very much for the comment and the fave. Oh and thanks for the watch too!
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Of course. Only you could turn out a stunning poem about writer's block... while having writer's block. :clap: Mind-blowing.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012   General Artist
:) it managed to get me out of my writers block. Atleast for the time being lol

thanks for the comment
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem. Glad the writing worked.
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NYCrainbow6 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student General Artist
pretty damn good for writers block :)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012   General Artist
its funny cause i wrote a bit of a it a while ago. Then i couldnt write anything so i tried to finish it off. Theni did finish it off and i feel like i might have a few more poems in me until i retire lol
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