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When I was lost you found me
So now you’re lost let me find you
Fall into my arms sweetheart
No questions, it’s what lovers do

Cradled in my arms tonight
Till the morning after ensues
Maybe then you can see things
From a different point of view

We can sit here all night babe
I’m no saint to offer guidance
Just some whispered words of love
I’ll be here when you break your silence

There is no doctrine of life
But only second hand wisdom
Each person is their own jailor
And inmate begging for freedom

Some of those are there by choice
Others will just misplace the key
You are indeed the latter
But please know you can rely on me

May this torrid time tick away
This is no requiem to our love
As I refuse to mourn the end
Of you, of me and of us
7x
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nightlynxness Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
This... is beautiful. It's incredibly sweet but not cheezy at all. So touching, it just kind of makes you want to love and be loved like that. *applause*
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013   General Artist
:) Glad it's not cheesy, I do try to avoid that. Thank you!
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wildylynx Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is no doctrine of life
But only second hand wisdom
Each person is their own jailor
And inmate begging for freedom'
wow!!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013   General Artist
:) glad you liked that bit. Thanks for the comment!
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EnlightenedEnigma Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWWWW!!!! <33333 this poem absolutely melted my heart it's so so soooo sweet!! What a lucky girl! ;) :hug:
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013   General Artist
:) aww thank you, very kind of you! :hug:
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xxAgonisticMiseryxx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
This is amazing. Truly, amazing.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much :)
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DkarnDezolus Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This means so much to me, I lost my everything, she left me alone and all I ever wanted was her love. This is so beautiful, whoever you wrote this for is a wonderfully lucky person and from someone who's been there...

Don't let her go, don't EVER let her go and if you do, just remember, it's not the end. It may seem like it, it feels impossible to stand, but you have the strength to do so. Stay strong, stay amazing :)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013   General Artist
I am really sorry to hear about your situation. I can imagine how it feels.

I have been lucky in a way. The girl I fell in love with is not able to be with me but we have managed to stay best friends. It's the most we can be and we are learning to accept that :)

thanks for your comment, i really do appreciate it.
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