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It's early December
We sit in our daughters room
Looking over her possessions
Praying she will be home soon

Just in time for Christmas
Her presents are under the tree
Ready to create some more
Of those beautiful memories

It's now mid December
Terror has frozen our tears
As our angels face is slowly
Beginning to disappear

Our lives are a landfill
For unimaginable pain
As her baby brother weeps
Wanting his sister back again

It's now late December
The festivities have past
As searches for our princess
Are slowly scaled back

A knock on the front door
The endless fall to the ground
"We have news on your daughter
A body has been found"
xxxxxxx
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EnlightenedEnigma Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Chills down my spine!! Scariest thing in the world is to be missing or lost....especially if you turn up dead haha no bueno. Good job :hug:
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Rifle1980 Mar 5, 2013   General Artist
yay youre rigt :D when i was little i got lost on the beach and scared my family to death lol

thanks for the comment! :)
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EnlightenedEnigma Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The beach?! Your mother is a strong woman to still be alive after a fright like that..!
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Fb-PHE13 Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad... yet the poem is beautiful.
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:iconmexicanpedo:
This just sent shivers down my spine.
Absolutely amazing, I can't point out how much I love your style often enough. Keep up the brilliant rhymes :hug:

-Dzeni
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Rifle1980 Feb 6, 2013   General Artist
I was just thinking the other day when I saw on your page how one of you is struggling for ideas and inspiration, how i would love to write something that would somehow inspire you. I hope I can do in the future as your art always always always excites me :hug:
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:iconmexicanpedo:
You are the best! thank you thank you thank you :heart:
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:iconnightlynxness:
The last two lines... *stab to the heart* Brilliantly conveyed!
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Rifle1980 Jan 19, 2013   General Artist
thank you! :)
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:iconsapphireb1509:
Your poem reminds me of "The Lovely Bones". Awesome work! :)
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