This is a declaration
I plan to do you some harm
Beware of the man with green eyes
Somebody raise the alarm
If only it were that simple
Into the shadows I will go
Hearts pound at such a rapid rate
Pulsating veins will explode
This a declaration
A statement of my intent
I have done some very bad things
Watch closer as I repent
Such a facile notion
That I can commit any sin
And beg for absolution
Before I begin again
This is a declaration
I am addicted to death
Fascinated by the feeling
Of taking your last breath
Such a beautiful moment
Your gaze seals an eternal bond
Envious of where you're going
As you rise to the great beyond
of that I must confess
for we must live in this world
fighting for every breath
"Such a facile notion
That I can commit any sin
And beg for absolution
Before I begin again"
"Sin" and "again" doesn't rhyme very well, but begin and sin does. Did you put the words in the wrong order or is it suppose to be this way? Sorry if this offended you in anyway, not my intention. I was simply curious...
The order of the words is how it was supposed to be
I think its probably something to do with how different people pronounce words. I do agree that sin and begin do rhyme much better, but it was necessary to put the 'again' in otherwise it wouldnt have made sense
thanks again for your comment and I definitely wasn't offended
Thanks for replying!
how have you been anyway? are you excited about Christmas??