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Listen to the words that rest easiest in your heart
‘A boy is coming that will change everything
With seven shades of emerald green in his eyes
One kiss from his lips will end your suffering

And he’ll wake you with a whisper from this nightmare
Prising the hands of hindsight from around your throat
While endeavouring to burst these unwanted thought bubbles
Before they have even had a chance to float

He’ll help you prick them with his narcoleptic needle
So you can fall back in to the limbo of your dreams
Where each lake of loathing can lead to endless love
But only through a passage of patience upstream

Take caution though as the resistance of the current
Is akin to the resistance he feels from you
To open those brown eyes that you’ve hidden so safely
Behind the flooded wasteland of your youth
realityisfarlessexciting....it's been a while
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Col.....  I want to cry.  I miss you so much.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014   General Artist
aww :) miss you too. I am going to try and be around a bit more often.

thanks for comment :)
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student General Artist
I think you have a misspelling. I believe it's "narcoleptic." not "narcolpetic."

This is beautiful. If you said blue or green eyes at the end, instead of brown, it would be the story of my life. 
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014   General Artist
hey Kerry :)

lol i just had someone say the same thing this morning. I acknowledged the comment but forgot to change it xD

will remember to do it this time :)

thanks for the comment!
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh! Hahaha! My inner editor just couldn't help it.  Been a while since I caught up with you! Miss you.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014   General Artist
yeah :) miss you too. I want to hear how you been getting along with that bass guitar :)
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aldwarke Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
Some potent phrases here. 'prising the hands of hindsight', for example.
i don't know the word narcolpetic.  What's the significance?
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014   General Artist
hey :)

thanks for the comment. It is much appreciated, mainly because it pointed out my typo lol. It should have been 'narcoleptic' as in the sleep disorder.
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EnlightenedEnigma Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome back!! We've missed your lovely poetry! 
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014   General Artist
thank you! :) so kind of you to say so

thanks for the fave too :D
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