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You allowed my presence
To be your malady
So fragile in essence
With vulnerability

The last of the letters
Has finally been sent
No newspaper cuttings
Just these feelings to vent

Alone in my abode
At the dining room table
I relinquish romance
To the realms of fable

The time of no reply
Holds sway over my life
Fork for food, spoon for sauce
Redundant is my knife

Arrogant ignorance
Have you forgot my name
Watch from your widow's walk
As you drench me in shame

Out to sea, out of sight
You cast my memory
I'll run aground on the shores
Of your inequity
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the stalker's path and the widow's walk
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*Cygam-7 Feb 12, 2013   General Artist
Mmmhmm that about sums them up. Wonderful depiction :) My favorite lines are
Fork for food, spoon for sauce
Redundant is my knife
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I'll run aground on the shores
Of your inequity
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*Rifle1980 Feb 12, 2013   General Artist
:) glad you liked those lines. Thanks so much for taking time to comment.
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Mood: Amazed ~Pietroschek Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like, what psychology verified, that indeed the culprits tell the victims it would be their fault...
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*Rifle1980 Nov 23, 2012   General Artist
thanks for reading this and commenting on it :)
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Mood: Joy ~Pietroschek Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wrote my own by now... if you like feel free to give constructive criticism... mine is fictional though...
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*Rifle1980 Nov 26, 2012   General Artist
cool, I will have a look out for it :)
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Mood: Joy ~Pietroschek Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I titled it 'The sanguine Twist - facing my Stalkers'. Remember, mine was tweaked for fiction...
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*Rifle1980 Jun 1, 2012   General Artist
thank you! :)
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