The chain of events that followed your birth
Were as tumultuous as each twisted link
Your mind was wired for the written word
But under no circumstances should you think
As the decreasing circles of sanity
Will ripple through your infant mind
The soul can't escape your hollow bones
Until you leave those thoughts behind
You feel trapped inside your grey matter
But freedom will be yours in the end
Once you realise that you are a miracle
That'll never be repeated again
Open your eyes to the beauty of the truth
That there is a reality worth seeing
And dive into the deepest depths of blue
Of your soul, your essence, your being
everything is blue
everything is blue in this world...
the deepest shade of mushroom blue...
out of my head
such a poetic comment. Thank you for reading my poem
I'm going t oprint this out and stick it on my notebook (:
this was quite beautiful my friend i would say the best yet
Wow... Just wow. You are insanely good man! Love it!
Beautiful work. Your title reminded me of a song by one of my favorite bands called The Deepest Blue. The song was about depression though.
yeah, the title didn't come to me until I got to that line in the poem. I did think at that point that it probably should be about depression with such a title but it was too late lol
A little random, but I always thought if my soul had a colour I'd like to think it was deep blue... Anyway interesting and uplifting, this one I really like the positive chi I'm getting from this XD
That's so sweet. I like the last line the most!
your writing never ceases to amaze me! Keep up the fantastic work
OMG - I feel I have taken a plunge into a transient beauty and depth that nowhere exists. Wow, if I were the recipient of such eloquence, I would be kissing your words.