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The chain of events that followed your birth
Were as tumultuous as each twisted link
Your mind was wired for the written word
But under no circumstances should you think

As the decreasing circles of sanity
Will ripple through your infant mind
The soul can't escape your hollow bones
Until you leave those thoughts behind

You feel trapped inside your grey matter
But freedom will be yours in the end
Once you realise that you are a miracle
That'll never be repeated again

Open your eyes to the beauty of the truth
That there is a reality worth seeing
And dive into the deepest depths of blue
Of your soul, your essence, your being
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:iconbroken-blues:
I'm going t oprint this out and stick it on my notebook (:
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Rifle1980 Feb 21, 2013   General Artist
thats the biggest compliment you could give me :heart: thank you :)
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SIGILSMONOLITH Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this was quite beautiful my friend i would say the best yet
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Feb 2, 2013   General Artist
thank you :) It's nice to know I am improving! :)
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ofelialoov Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow... Just wow. You are insanely good man! :) Love it!
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Jan 23, 2013   General Artist
thanks man! you are so kind saying that :)
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:iconmysocksrock:
Beautiful work. Your title reminded me of a song by one of my favorite bands called The Deepest Blue. The song was about depression though.
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Rifle1980 Jan 22, 2013   General Artist
yeah, the title didn't come to me until I got to that line in the poem. I did think at that point that it probably should be about depression with such a title but it was too late lol
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:iconnightlynxness:
A little random, but I always thought if my soul had a colour I'd like to think it was deep blue... Anyway interesting and uplifting, this one =D I really like the positive chi I'm getting from this XD
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Rifle1980 Jan 22, 2013   General Artist
Glad you enjoyed it and I think on some level our souls probably do have a colour :)
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