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Breathe in and think of love
Breathe out and think of pain
Listen to the feeling in your heart
Not the voices in your brain

Hark the wind blowing through the trees
Ignore the dirge of modern life
Use your ears to hear the birds
and with them let your worries take flight

Glide upon the pockets of wind
Wherever the breeze shall take you
Make the journey beautiful
Rather than the place you wish to get to

Breathe in and think of the future
Breathe out and forget the past
I know the pain seems never ending
But such dismal days will not last

Hear my whispered words softly
Stirring emotions in your heart
I will offer my hand, my love
As the birds begin to depart

I will show you love and freedom
if you take my hand and stay
There will be no pain or reason
From which you need  to run away
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breathe in, breathe out.
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(no word to express that )
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*Rifle1980 Oct 10, 2012   General Artist
:)
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=LegendarySim May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So I figured I would check out your other work to see how good it is. Turns out I am not disappointing. My favorite thing about your writing is how you take ordinary nonchalant moments and craft them into poetic moments.
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*Rifle1980 May 15, 2012   General Artist
thanks :) i do try and see poetry in ordinary situations whether happy or sad :)
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~reveur-artiste Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so wonderful, one of the most beautiful poems I've read lately.
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*Rifle1980 Apr 14, 2012   General Artist
aw thanks, i am happy you enjoyed it :) thank you for faving also
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Soft touch with a hard brush stroke! LIKEY!!!

Pain is a simple enough concept to grasp. You stub your toe, shout, perhaps utter a few expletives, rub it better and it eventually fades.

“People are afraid of themselves, of their own reality; their feelings most of all. People talk about how great love is, but that's bullshit. Love hurts. Feelings are disturbing. People are taught that pain is evil and dangerous. How can they deal with love if they're afraid to feel? Pain is meant to wake us up. People try to hide their pain. But they're wrong. Pain is something to carry, like a radio. You feel your strength in the experience of pain. It's all in how you carry it. That's what matters. Pain is a feeling. Your feelings are a part of you. Your own reality. If you feel ashamed of them, and hide them, you're letting society destroy your reality. You should stand up for your right to feel your pain.”
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*Rifle1980 Apr 14, 2012   General Artist
thank you :)
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~CrimsonSmolder Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful ! <3
I Absolutely Loved it : D !
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*Rifle1980 Mar 28, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you very much. I am glad you liked it!
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