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Every morning without fail
I wake up at 5 o'clock
My bones are aware of something
Of which my mind is not

They tell me to move forward
Propelling me from my bed
Don't drain me of ambition
Please take my blood instead

Every morning without fail
The sun shines on where I lay
Characters in place, stage is set
What'll fate offer me today

Mister mundane mumbles
From his melancholic head
Don't rob me of the sunlight
Please take my blood instead

Every morning without fail
You give me belief in fate
Before this pensive pillow
Is lowered to suffocate

Fake feathers smother my face
There will be no tears shed
Don't take their memories of me
Please take my blood instead
take my blood instead
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:iconsarahblerg:
I want to sing this.... is that weird? LOVE IT SO MUCH
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Rifle1980 Jul 31, 2013   General Artist
:) maybe it will become a song one day and you can sing it and we can both be hugely successful
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:iconsarahblerg:
haha oh yes I can see it now! :P
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FreeFallHero Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I saw one of your poems few minutes ago.
Now I'm gonna read at least half of them !!!!
I don't really like poems, I'm more of a draw-guy. But poems you make are... BEAUTIFUL :'D
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Rifle1980 Sep 21, 2012   General Artist
thats so great to hear :)

Makes it all the better too that you dont normally like poems that much :)

thanks for the comment, fave and watching me :D
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FreeFallHero Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd do more if I could :)
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:iconredstoryteller:
I absolutly love this piece!!
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Rifle1980 Sep 12, 2012   General Artist
aww thanks :)
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HiddenBehindShadows Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OH MY GOD. If it was possible to hug a poem, I would hug this. *INTERNET HUG!*
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