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When I was just a child
About twenty years back
I never would have thought
I would turn out like that
Or indeed like this
If I speak in the present tense
I guess I’m tense in the present
If that makes any sense

When I was at the mercy
Of the medical profession
They told me I was suffering
With clinical depression
And tapestries woven this tight
Into such an infant mind
Would be difficult to unspool
Unthread and leave behind

When I was just a boy
Around ten or so years back
I fell into a deep hole
But it felt more like a trap
I couldn’t get out of there
In fact I’m stuck here still
And all anyone can do
Is to prescribe another pill
7x
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Mysticgirl-Rage Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow O.o what a talent
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013   General Artist
:) thank you so much. I appreciate you saying that.
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EnlightenedEnigma Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's as if you are the master puppet playing with words. Standing ovation :hug:
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013   General Artist
:D thank you for taking time to read my poems. It means alot to me.
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EnlightenedEnigma Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's nice to read artwork every now and then other than looking at it :)
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bunocerous Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, the syllable flow and rhythm, and the rhyme of the whole thing, and the content, this is all really good.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
thank you and thanks for the fave too :)
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nightlynxness Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
D: I truly sympathize. and empathize. But don't ever give up on happiness, or your dreams. Hang in there; even while stuck in that place, I believe you can still carve out a small haven. Still, there'll always be days that suck bad. But that's all the more reason to cherish the good times... You're not alone in this :hug:
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   General Artist
aww thank you. Very kind and beautiful words.

I really do appreciate all the comments you give me :hug:
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JiaRoyale Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I know the frustrations: the doctor wasn't even interested in my complaints or changing the prescription: only upped the dosage, again and again and again. It cost me my job, my GPA, almost my marriage. Finding a support group who'd been through the same helped a great deal: they'll talk about their side effects more than the doctors acknowledged it, and helped me recognize what I could handle and what I couldn't. Even therapies vary greatly: talk therapy actually made me worse, but cognitive-behavioral therapy helped a lot, and now I can be part of that support group, saying, "this is how this one works, this is how this one works." And I dumped that doctor and found one who's willing to work with me.
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