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We were found in a pool of blood
Starcrossed lovers in each others arms
Suicide note in your pocket
Your hand grasped tightly in my palm

You were wearing that red dress
Under your overcoat
The rain had fallen hard that day
Distorting the words which you'd wrote:

'Dear cruel world and everyone within
I am leaving you all today
With the only boy I have ever loved
Lay silent here next to me

Nobody understands me
Or heals my wounds like he does
He feels the pain and sadness too
and I think we have suffered enough

No tears should be shed on our passing
As our souls now reside as one
Look for us in the rain dew
Look for us in the morning sun

Listen for our voices in the wind
Whispering how everything will be ok
Life was ugly but our death has been played out
In such a beautiful way'
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:iconthatonegirl303:
ThatOneGirl303 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Such a powerful write. :-P
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013   General Artist
thank you very much for the comment and the faves :)
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
This seems like its familiar like you wrote something similar before. It's so beautiful though.
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012   General Artist
thank you :)
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconpapership-lonewalker:
Is this the real life ?
Cause this poetry seem to come from a dream
Beyond mankind
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012   General Artist
such a beautiful thing to say, thank you :)

I supposes easiest way to describe it as a daydream I had
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DariaGALLERY Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice and sad. But togather forever is the best ending) great poem my dear)))) =)
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012   General Artist
yeah, thats what i want too. I want my perfect fairytale and to be with my princess forever and ever :)
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DariaGALLERY Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mur mur)))) so tender)))) i want too) =)
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