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A chemical reaction
Akin to the wings of a dove
You feel a karmic wind change
From this feeling called love

As I unfurl my wings
To the plague in your heart
I am your remedy
Now the healing can start

A spiritual moment
A timely epiphany
Everything in its right place
Just as it's meant to be

As I unfurl my wings
To the plague in your mind
Within the darkest caverns
I will bring you sunshine

A healing process
We will soothe each other's sores
My love, you are my life line
As much as I am yours

As we spread our arms
Two souls embrace as one
Your remedy is my cure
And our symptoms are now gone
2013 xxxxxxx
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EnlightenedEnigma Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: love is so beautiful!!! :hug:
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013   General Artist
:) thank you for the comment :hug:
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nightlynxness Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
A lovely poem to start the year!~
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013   General Artist
:) glad you liked it!
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I love how you keep using the wings, the imagery is breath taking .w.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013   General Artist
thank you Soph :hug:
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
your welcome col :glomp:
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
So cute
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   General Artist
thank you :)
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Ur welcome
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xTurtlina Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
The last two lines are <3
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
thank you Hessa :) Hope you are feeling better.

That almost rhymes o.o
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DSteffi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You simply just blow me away with everything you write! O.O
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
aww thats so kind.

You know today I was feeling down. Your message absolutely changed my mood. I mean it too. Thank you :)
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ofelialoov Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is amazing... !
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much :) Thanks for faves too!
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ofelialoov Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're very welcome! :)
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
:)
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   General Artist
:D
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cupcakekitten20 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
that is so beautiful. i love how you put the words "plague" and "wings" in there. i just find that much more powerful. i guess more like imagery? anyway, i like it, its very sweet
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   General Artist
thanks so much :) Glad you like my choice of words too! :)
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Dadarian11 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love your diction and word choice, I've always favored pretty words like epiphany.
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   General Artist
Thank you :) I am the same. Some words just look ugly written down or spoken where as others look and sound beautiful :)
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Truly wonderful poetry.
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   General Artist
:) thank you. Glad you enjoyed it
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
You're welcome :D
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DevonEaton Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome poem! Quick edit though: stanza 5, line2 should be written "We will soothe each other's sores". Keep up the impressive work and I'll keep reading!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   General Artist
thanks for the comment and for the edit :)

You know I read through again and again to look for mistakes lol cant believe i didnt spot that :D
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:icondevoneaton:
DevonEaton Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's okay, I do the same thing. Sometimes you just need fresh eyes.
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