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Reality bites
Where as he tore shreds
From the pristine pages
Of the book you once read

A promise of a Prince
And of a fairytale
On those lonely nights
Serving to regale

And offer some solace
In times of despair
When hope felt as distant
As the love you once shared

Your book was unique
Though you try to replace
The words and the images
But you still see his face

Suffocated by life
Each breath hard to find
A broken, tarnished heart
In tumultuous times

Reality bites
But with your pride still intact
Maybe now is the time
That for once you bite back
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DariaGALLERY Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yesh.......that once you bite back.............
hehe......i'm trying to keep a control of biting back)))))))))))))
love it, great poem)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012   General Artist
awww you know if ever you need someone to talk to you can note me :)

before you bite anyone :)
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DariaGALLERY Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahahah))) funny bunny)))) sure i know)))) you're a good friend kitty))))
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wonderful work. Especially love the last stanza!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012   General Artist
:) glad you enjoyed it. Thank you
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're quite welcome.
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DSteffi Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"Reality bites
But with your pride still intact
Maybe now is the time
That for once you bite back"

Perfect. Just perfect. O.O

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All the effort is pointless if you don't believe in yourself.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012   General Artist
aww thank you :) Very kind of you
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BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRQZLLL Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love the ending! bite back!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012   General Artist
yes! :D

thanks for reading and commenting :)
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