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You stitched my lips today
So I could not speak
I sliced my slender throat
So I could still breathe

Dowsed acid in my eyes
So I could not see
But I reached out to touch her
She in turn touched me

You cut my ears today
I hear no birds sing
Or an infant's laughter
And the joy that brings

You bound my wrists and hands
Now they are red raw
I should blindly stumble
But still I stand tall

You sliced my fingertips
I can't feel her skin
The softness of her hair
The barrel of my pen

You broke my legs in two
Now I cannot walk
Nor can I see or hear
Feel or talk

You did all of these things
To keep me quiet
Yet the passion that stirs
Is as loud as a riot

Listen for the silence
That comes before the sound
Now feel for my touch
As I will never back down
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Mood: Love ~MissPounceALot Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is truly amazing, I love the thought and effort your put into this. :love:
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*Rifle1980 Apr 24, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much. It's worth the effort when I receive a comment like yours :)
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~MissPounceALot Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aw, Thanks :) Your really are a talented writer.
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~Sar-girl Apr 15, 2013  Student
This is like a horror love story. Beautiful.
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*Rifle1980 Apr 15, 2013   General Artist
:) glad you liked it, thank you.
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~monikata Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
so deep and so touching
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*Rifle1980 Nov 13, 2012   General Artist
thank you, glad you liked it :)
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:iconrayne711:
Certainly a flawless transition between each stanza and the ending was great. Reminds me of one of my own pieces. ^.^
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*Rifle1980 Sep 19, 2012   General Artist
thats great to hear, thank you :)

and thanks for faving too
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:iconderpalicious39:
wow...that was...wow.. very touching
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