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I screamed at him "I'm leaving!"
He smiled and said "okay"
I said "no, for once I mean it
This time you wont make me stay"

But bags were never really packed
And that night in our bed I lay
The taste of blood on my lips
Still remained there the next day

I screamed at him "please stop this!
I am the Mother to your child
Baby, I know you have a temper
I know my ways make you so wild"

"But I promise I'll try harder
Not to push your buttons so much"
With that the beast resumed control
As I quiver at each stolen touch

They scream at me to leave him
To them it's such a simple choice
But it's been so long since I've heard
Anything but my master's voice

To the point that I no longer know
My own mind or my own heart
But today he said he's sorry again
And tomorrow will be a fresh start
xxxxxxx
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nightlynxness Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Your words really have the power to touch people's hearts. Wonderfully written!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013   General Artist
that's really nice to hear and encouraging too. Makes me want to write more :)
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flippin-nuggets-25 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Your artwork has been featured here: [link] :)
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ThatOneGirl303 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was amazing. Though I've never had this happen to e I've seen it play out and you have captured it most precisely. Great write.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   General Artist
thanks so much and thank you for all the faves and for watching me too :)

I see that you are new, so welcome to dA :)
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ThatOneGirl303 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course.
New account, old user.
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   General Artist
ah, welcome back then :)
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ThatOneGirl303 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's great to be back.
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