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I use your mascara flooded tears
As ink for my pen
A pot full supplied as I suggest
That we still remain friends
I dip the flight feathered quill
Into those murky tears
The ivory parchment paper
Will soak them up nicely my dear

I use your powder based foundation
As I'm ashamed of these scars
There is no foundation to my pain
So how did it get this far
I paint 'love' and I paint 'hate'
On to manicured finger nails
You make up your pretty face
Before you make up another tale

I use your ruby red lipstick
To tell you of my curse
Wrote 'redrum' on the mirror
You see 'murder' in reverse
Make me up to be beautiful
Before these scars become infected
I am the only animal
On which our make up has been tested
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the first part of final verse inspired by The Shining by Stephen King.
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~megalotty1998 Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
This is truly one of the most clever and well thought out poems I've ever read.
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*Rifle1980 Feb 17, 2013   General Artist
thats so kind of you to say so, thank you :)
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:iconalittlebitoffaith:
Ok I Love this I love it it is truly amazing especially redrum on the mirror is reverse I never thought of that and I love that
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*Rifle1980 Oct 5, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you, glad you liked it
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I find myself coming back to this piece of poetry very often. This is the only piece I've ever read that still haunts me.
It's very, very beautiful.
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*Rifle1980 Jul 6, 2012   General Artist
thats so great to hear that you keep coming back to it. I am so glad you enjoyed it :)
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~Sivasockz Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist
wow very deep hun <33 loved it!!
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*Rifle1980 Jun 8, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you very much!
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~Sivasockz Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist
welcome! ^-^
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*NYCrainbow6 May 16, 2012  Student General Artist
i don't know what to say except you have become if you didn't consider yourself one before, a MASTER POET!!!!!!!!!
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