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The middle three letters of the word “Earth”
Spell out the word “art”
This is fitting because when I create
The beauty of the world is where I start

The middle three letters of the word “believe”
Spell out the word “lie”
This is fitting because for all those who accede
There are an equal amount who deny

The middle three letters of the word “lonely”
Spell out the word “one”
This is fitting because I have felt isolated
Ever since you have been gone

The middle two letters of the word “life”
Spell out the word “if”
This is fitting because only when it’s too late
Will you wonder what you could’ve done with it
Let Us Live / Letters Live

Inspired by this image [link] by :iconmexicanpedo:

thanks Dzeni! :)
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mexicanpedo Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
I just realized I never commented on here, wtf!!

I absolutely love this one, Collin.
I couldn't be prouder to have inspired you. <3

And I lovelovelove how the poem is so...hm how do I say.. regular?
As in, the repetition of the words in every stanza. Amazing work as always :)

xx Dzeni
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013   General Artist
:) Glad you liked it Dzeni. I get really excited when I can find the words that are inspired by a piece of art that I love so much.

I am really grateful that you keep doing what you are doing as it inspires me and others alot <3
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lacesnflowers Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, the words are alive...
This is an excellent poem, I loved it!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013   General Artist
thank you! :) I appreciate your comment
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lacesnflowers Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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NYCrainbow6 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Now that's the kind of things I've never thought of before. thought provoking. LOVE IT!!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   General Artist
yeah, I was looking at my friends photo and saw the word 'one' in 'lonely' then started to think about others too. Then had to try and make it into a poem lol

glad you liked it :)
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NYCrainbow6 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
That's pretty awesome!!!
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Broken-Blues Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
you know, anyone can tell how thoughtful you are, because you put it through your poetry perfectly (: love it, especially the last one
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   General Artist
I am glad you like that bit :)

you are so sweet giving me all these comments and faves. I think we have potential to be great friends :D
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