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I hold the guitar against me
But I'm afraid it just wont do
No notes that I play could compare
To the symphony that is you

So who is the orchestrator
Of this harmonic elegance
The beauty of which sustains me
With such a lasting resonance

Angels, please sing us a chorus
And paint the clouds so silver lined
May she always dream in colour
And may I always speak in rhyme
One single whispered word from her
Always seems to eclipse my pain
With belief, hope and destiny
Forever in love, I remain


I hold the paintbrush in my hand
Until creative thoughts will cease
But no strokes could ever come close
To your beautiful masterpiece

Each colour is so delicate
So rare and so understated
From a birth and a blank canvas
To potential God created

Angels, please sing us a chorus
And paint the clouds so silver lined
May she always dream in colour
And may I always speak in rhyme
One single whispered word from her
Always seems to eclipse my pain
With belief, hope and destiny
Forever in love, we remain
for Bee
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NykiiLynn Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i was singing this as i read it. very beautiful.
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Rifle1980 Oct 30, 2012   General Artist
thats reall cool to hear as i did do some music for it too :)
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DariaGALLERY Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwww))))) so nice so nice)))))))))))))
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Rifle1980 Oct 7, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you, glad you like it :hug:
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DariaGALLERY Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:huggle: meow)
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:iconnightlynxness:
Beautifully in love with this!
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Rifle1980 Sep 29, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you very much!
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Vegetabelle Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
One day, I hope I have a boyfriend as sweet as you. Bee is a lucky girl. :iconbigeyesplz: This is an adorable poem. So well written!
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Rifle1980 Sep 14, 2012   General Artist
i am working on some music for this too :)

thanks for the comment!
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Vegetabelle Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! cool! You're welcome!
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