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I skilfully avoid all of the questions
About my fragile state of mind
I wonder how anyone could locate me
When I was never here to find

Maybe I only exist in conversations
Filled with the conceit of hindsight
But it’s too late to drop the gun to the table
With the bullets already in flight

I skilfully avoid feelings of happiness
It seems more of an effort to smile
A shadow was permanently cast over me
Just like the face of a sundial

Maybe I only exist as a silhouette
A vague outline that’s lost in time
Is it too late for me to turn away from my woes
And show my face to the sunshine?
realityisfarlessexciting
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NO it isn't late for you and you've got everything in your hands. maybe you have been disappointed by many around you. well you aren't alone. we all have been through this. it is not because people disappoint us but because they fail to express their true selves and we in return fail to understand their true selves :) you are completely fine. this is your learning phase and you will come out only stronger :hug:
Qita
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013   General Artist
Such a kind message. I thank you very much.

Your message makes a lot of sense.

Nice to meet you Qita, i like that name :)
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's my nick :D. Nice to know you as well :rose: you've got an honest heart that's so want to come out from the regular crowd :)
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DevonEaton Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love that second verse.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013   General Artist
really glad you liked it :) thank you
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ThrivingEbe Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
'It seems more of an effort to smile' that was me yesterday (:
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Dragoneer99 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
I always like things like this.

I myself suffer from anxiety, and thus depression.

Things like this tell me someone can understand.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013   General Artist
and it is good for me to hear a comment like that too. Knowing I am not alone in those feelings :)

thank you for the comment
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
:heart:
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