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Put down all of your books
Open your troubled mind
Leave the cell-like classroom
And feel the warm sunshine

Beating down from above
On your beautiful skin
Forget all you have learnt
Let your journey begin

Breathe the air on green hills
Open eyes to blue sky
They tried to hide the truth
But with no alibi

Are you just a product
Of wistful memories
Or is there still some time
To change your destiny

Tether your torrid thoughts
Silence those languid words
That pollute your young mind
Instead choose to observe

The beauty that surrounds
Nature is your mother
Wisdom is your father
Creation your lover

The world outside your door
Can be a hollow place
Dividing us through fear
Of religion and race

Why not come together
As beyond our skin
We can live forever
Through our beauty within

Move forward with one love
Your untouchable soul
For once in your life, friend
Free your mind, lose control
Please Lose Control
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killzonekrissy Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  New member
absolutely perfect! I really needed to hear this right now! you're an amazing writer!! I am completely inspired. :)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   General Artist
aww I am glad if it helped you. Thank you! :)
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vampiress-chic7 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Best thing ive read so far tonight. Beautiful!!!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012   General Artist
thats so kind of you, thank you! :)
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vampiress-chic7 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :) your welcome
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LadyXaim Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Writer
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012   General Artist
that was so lovely thank you :) it made me think alot and i am gonna share it with some friends of mine who i think could take a time out every now and then :)
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LadyXaim Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Writer
No probem and yaaaaay spread the word ^^
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for writing this! :hug: I tell my friends this constantly but never follow my own advice...gorgeous poem, my friend!
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012   General Artist
lol yeah, thats exactly the same as me. I advise people on all sorts of situations i really fail at lol

thanks for the comment :)
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