Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconrifle1980: More from Rifle1980


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
June 1, 2012
File Size
1,016 bytes
Submitted with
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
4,272
Favourites
219 (who?)
Comments
66
Downloads
24
×
Every time with the same brush
This girl paints so many strokes
Each one speaking of emotions
Louder than the words she wrote

So where does the magic lie,
Allowing this girl's mood to swing?
Is it in the paint or the colours,
The feeling of release it brings?

She lets go of those emotions
That are too painful to express
The open ear of a loved one
Now an empty white canvas

Cathartic is the process
With her dainty little strokes
Thick layers of paint will take us
To land's nobody else knows

Now she paints with love for us
And happiness in her heart
The trees, the flowers, the sunset
The smiles, the eyes, the stars

Every time with same brush
Just different colours and shades
As the white canvas disappears
Her negative thoughts begin to fade
I was talking to my love Bee :iconstolenindigo: the other night. She told me how she paints sunsets and trees when she is feeling sad and angry.

We had the idea to both write seperate poems on the same subject but using our different styles.

So this is mine but you can read Bees wonderful poem here too [link]

it blew my mind :heart:
Add a Comment:
 
:iconcygam-7:
Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
Brilliant!
Reply
:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013   General Artist
thank you! :)
Reply
:iconjeffrinjawahar:
jeffrinjawahar Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thick layers of paint will take us
To land's nobody else knows

It's amazing.... the way you end ....
Reply
:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012   General Artist
thank you very much for that. I do appreciate your words
Reply
:iconjeffrinjawahar:
jeffrinjawahar Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
keep going..
Reply
:iconkatieraff:
katieraff Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your poetry
Reply
:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you very much. Really nice of you
Reply
:iconimmyself97:
ImMyself97 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i love the last stanza! all your poetry is beautiful =)
Reply
:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012   General Artist
:) thats really kind of you, thank you :)
Reply
:iconcuddleslut17:
CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So that was pretty much beautiful. The 4 stanza is my fav. I love it all though. It flows very nicely and the ryame isn't forced. Great job.
Reply
Add a Comment: