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Everywhere I go I see her face
I never got to touch her soft skin
Tell me how can I mourn the ending
When we were yet to even begin

And please don't you tell me to move on
You really think that I'm not trying?
In truth all that I want right now
Is to get through a day without crying
a short poem from along time ago.....
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Windowsill7 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Beautifully written. Short and to the point in a great way ^^ Hope you're feeling better now though :)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013   General Artist
thank you. It's a difficult situation but then again alot of people go through difficult situations :)
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Windowsill7 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
True a lot of people do. I guess it is the getting through the situation that counts :)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013   General Artist
yep, it's true :)
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Bad--Blood Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
This is a great poem, I can relate to it incredibally.
Is it alright if I use this on my page, maybe? I'd give you credit and link back to your page, though, of course. ^^
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   General Artist
yeah, of course its alright :) Thanks for asking and thanks for the comment :)
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Grnideladeee Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Very nice
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013   General Artist
thanks :)
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AlwaysCreative Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww.....
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012   General Artist
lol I think it was me who needed the tissues on this one :)
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