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When I close my green eyes
If I focus I can see
People and places from my past
Etched in my memory

If a blind man closes his eyes
What can he possibly see
Without any visual images
Stored in his memory

How do I describe colour
To man who is born blind
The same way I describe my love
Within these heart felt rhymes


When I close my green eyes
I use my mind to conjure up
Dreams of the future, based on
Pages already written in my book

If a blind woman closes her eyes
What future can she see
Unable to visualise
Her fate and her destiny

How do I describe colour
To woman who is born blind
The same way I describe my love
Within these heart felt rhymes
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I am randomly looking for great work that intrigues me and low and behold ....Souljacol keeps coming up.....ty
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*Rifle1980 Feb 20, 2013   General Artist
It's really a boost to my confidence that you enjoy my poems. Makes me want to write more :)
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*DariaGALLERY Oct 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i like it much))
mmm....i still cant find enough words to describe love.......its really hard))) hehe .......you know))))))))))
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*Rifle1980 Oct 7, 2012   General Artist
aww so you are in love now, Daria? :)

I have trouble too describing love. I used to think I knew what it was but had no idea. Now i do :)
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*DariaGALLERY Oct 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh i'm totally in love)))) hihi)))) i mean, i can tell what is love, but not enough words to describe all of my emotions) and will never be enough) its too big)

i'm really happy for you kitty))))) =)
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:iconnightlynxness:
Nice =) Just so happens that I'm working on an assignment about eye diseases
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*Rifle1980 Sep 29, 2012   General Artist
:) nice coincidence :) thanks for reading and commenting
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~Vegetabelle Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You make a valid point. This is lovely!
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*Rifle1980 Sep 14, 2012   General Artist
:) thank you!
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~Vegetabelle Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :hug:
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