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I cried tonight
But it was not like before
When someone to love me
Was all I implored

This time the tears fell
Because my wish has come true
My prayers have been answered
In the wonder that is you

I smiled tonight
But it was not like before
When it was just a physical response
Nothing more

This time I smile
Not from the mouth but the eyes
This lost little boy
Has finally come back to life

I wrote tonight
This poem, these words
About my best friend
my love, my girl

This time it seems
That indeed you feel the same
I prayed to God for your arrival
and soon after you came
realityisfarlessexciting
:heart:
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RedStoryTeller Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
This is so cute :D
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012   General Artist
thank you :D
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RedStoryTeller Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
Welcome
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DeadManWalking26 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
This one is amazing. Really touching on so many,so deep, layers.
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012   General Artist
thank you very much :)
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peteachu Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
Thank you for the gift of your poems they're quite good.
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012   General Artist
thank you very much for taking time to tell me :)
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jEsUs-Fr3ak Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student General Artist
oh wow this is an awesome, cute poem! :dalove:
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012   General Artist
glad you liked it and thanks for the fave :)
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jEsUs-Fr3ak Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student General Artist
you're very welcome!I had to fave it! :D
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