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Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
hahaha that was funny... I'm running out of jokes now! Okay one more before I go to think more up, a man walked into a bar the other day and woke up with a headache in the morning as it was made of metal! :D yep that was bad!!!!!
Wed Apr 23, 2014, 3:17 PM
Rifle1980:iconrifle1980:
hahaha i like it:D "You know, somebody actually complimented me on my driving today. They left a little note on the windscreen, it said 'Parking Fine.' So that was nice."
Wed Apr 23, 2014, 7:51 AM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
Why are Zombies so bad at Facebook? 'cause they're just rotten friends! ha ha
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 3:27 PM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
Okay I've got another for you :D
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 3:26 PM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
Yeah, I think that would be a great idea!
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 3:07 AM
Rifle1980:iconrifle1980:
hahah i like it :D i should rename this as a jokebox i think
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 2:41 AM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
Cause they're thinking! yeah I know it's bad :D
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 2:06 AM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
Why do clocks tick?
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 1:52 AM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
That's a good one!
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 1:51 AM
Rifle1980:iconrifle1980:
I phoned the local gym and I asked if they could teach me how to do the splits. He said, "How flexible are you?" I said, "I can't make Tuesdays."
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 1:49 AM
Rifle1980:iconrifle1980:
:D at last someone shouts! and humour (especially dark) is always appreciated lol
Tue Apr 22, 2014, 1:48 AM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
Two cannibals where eating a clown and they said to one another "Doe0s this taste funny to you?" Sorry dark sense of humor alert!!!!
Mon Apr 21, 2014, 5:57 PM
Deadfish-SilentArmy:icondeadfish-silentarmy:
Hey I'm SHOUTING at you... haha
Mon Apr 21, 2014, 5:54 PM
Rifle1980:iconrifle1980:
Someone shout at me! :)
Sun Apr 13, 2014, 3:04 PM
Rifle1980:iconrifle1980:
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Wed Aug 29, 2012, 2:44 AM
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Like1guy 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your poetry.  You are one of the few people on here that uses rhyme scheme.  Do you have any tips for me, so that I may improve?
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Rifle1980 1 day ago   General Artist
hi there :) thank you for the watch.

Not sure if i am in a position to give out advice but only thing i can say is to be patient in finding the right rhyme. Never force it just for the sake of it because it will seem obvious. If you cant find a word to rhyme then maybe change the word you are trying to rhyme with. I always count the syllables too and read through many times to try to make sure the poem flows well. Another thing, use a thesaurus. So many great words in the English language to choose from that your bound to find a rhyme sooner or later :D

thanks again for commenting and watching :)
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Like1guy 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I meant more along the lines of writing in general, but thanks anywho.  And no need for a 'thank you'.  Your writing deserved it.
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:iconflamingodancer123:
Thanks for joining the group my friend, it will be all the better for it!!!  Welcome to :iconheavenlybackyardbird:!!!
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:iconrifle1980:
Rifle1980 5 days ago   General Artist
oh i am very glad to be there. Thank you for having me :)
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